Posts : 11 PokeDollars : 27 Join date : 2015-03-01
Subject: Finally :D Sun Mar 08, 2015 12:34 pm
Name: Morgan Smith
Age: 15
Birthday: 3/2
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Straight
Height and Weight: 6'4 160 pounds
Appearance: (its not gonna be a paragraph. xd) He has brown hair and blue eyes. he has a scratch on his arm from battling his gible before receiving it as a gift
Personality: he is quiet but when you get to know him he never shuts up. he seems more attatched to his gible than most trainers are after years.
Pokemon: ((YOU ONLY GET ONE POKEMON. You're just starting out, so hold your horses. You will be able to capture Pokemon once your application is accepted. Info and rules on capturing Pokemon are under Rules and Information. Your Pokemon must be a BASIC LEVEL 5 Pokemon of your choosing. No Legendaries, No Shinies)) (can basic be gible? if not charmander.)
Likes: ((3 minimum)) dragons. his family. not being bothered when focusing
Dislikes: ((3 minimum)) being bothered. ice types. being stranded from gible.
Motivation: ((What motivates your character?)) he wants to be the very best like no one ever was (dun dun dun) (Sorry) he received his gible as a gift after "battling" it as a joke for five minutes. (replaced with charmander maybe)
Glag Fish Out of Water
Posts : 37 PokeDollars : 55 Join date : 2014-10-20
Subject: Re: Finally :D Sun Mar 08, 2015 2:03 pm
Okay, a couple minor problems. But first- Yeah, Gible it totally fine, so you can edit that in ;3 I'm gonna ask for a lot more in most of the sections, namely the physical description and personality.
For the description part, what does his face look like? Does he come across as nice or hostile or anything at first glance? What sort of clothes does he wear? Does he have any tics, like drumming one's fingers or biting their nails?
For personality, why is he quiet? Is there anything in particular he likes a lot? What's his opinion on pokemon? Is he social? In likes, you put 'not being bothered when focusing.' What does that entail? Does he have speciffic things to focus on? I just want to understand the character more. I'm pretty sure you know what he's like- You just have to type all that down!
Another tiny thing, but you kept the things in the (( ))s, which aren't necessary xD
Thedragontrainer Fish Out of Water
Posts : 11 PokeDollars : 27 Join date : 2015-03-01
Subject: Re: Finally :D Sun Mar 08, 2015 3:08 pm
well i was tired as hell. im gonna edit some stuff.
Glag Fish Out of Water
Posts : 37 PokeDollars : 55 Join date : 2014-10-20
Subject: Re: Finally :D Thu Mar 12, 2015 10:35 am
Doesn't look like you've edited it yet. You gonna do that soon?
Thedragontrainer Fish Out of Water
Posts : 11 PokeDollars : 27 Join date : 2015-03-01
Subject: Re: Finally :D Fri Mar 13, 2015 2:24 pm
sorry. busy couple weeks. no time to edit. i'll do it on sunday if im not 100% exhausted
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